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Splinters puncture membrane-covered clouds
time and time again her yellow breath
of smog and fog and ink on wet newspapers
sticks to black asphalt covered with May-colored sprinkles
and geometric daffodils unsnapping necks.
A condom wrapper defies the suckwhirl tide and clings to driftwood
and bangles of sky glimmer in a rainbow collapse
of oil. There's metal in her nostrils and linoleum in her eyes;
she slips piles of nails and bloody slime down my throat
along with percussive bells and a flower like stained napkins.
blah blah 7 train blah blah imagist
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justb Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2004   Writer
May sprinkles sounds like it works.
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adahplatha Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2004
:heart: thank you darlin'
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:iconjustb:
justb Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2004   Writer
nice napkins reference. everything could be too!
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Vesiculae Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2004
unsnapping necks

As opposed to...snapping necks?

And you just earned a fave. From me. Cover THAT in May-colored sprinkles.
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adahplatha Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2004
Yeah, since the "geometric daffodils" in questions make traffic safer, kinda, so they unsnap necks rather than snapping them.

And thank you, darlin'. :heart: etc muchly
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